Friday, July 8, 2011

the field

Have I died?
is this heaven?
thinking as your hand slides around mine. Leading me down a dirt path. The field barely visiable in the dim dusk light. We step over the barrier from gravel to grass, grass as high as my thigh, almost leaving the world behind. The sound of russeling grass is what i have longed to hear. The feeling of your strong hand leading me deeper into the field is the thing i dreamed to feel. Reaching the place we belong, far enough from the path , deep enough in the grass, in a our own world. You lay me down, laying beside me, pulling me to you while pressing your tender lips to mine. Your protective arms wrapped around me, your fingers moving the hair from my face. My heart pounding so loud it drowns out the sound of the crickets. The whispers of your sweet words of love almost lost in the sound of the wind blowing through the tall grass. The warmth of the summer air is no match for the warmth of your body. Our tongues entwined together while fireflies pass over us, jealous of the light of our love. There is nowhere on earth i would want to be besides here in your arms under the millions of stars. Stars twinkling and dancing above us.
Kissing ....
kissing your sweet lips...
falling deeper in love with you...
my love overwhelming....
You, my love, make this moment heaven to me. Heaven on earth under the stars.


  1. Aww, that was achingly beautiful, wistful and charming. Gorgeous *hugs*

  2. @mojo- WOW. That is an incredible compliment! Thank you so much! :)

  3. This is absolutely amazing! I love this piece.

  4. thanks Diana again! your words really mean alot :)

  5. Excellent write! Passionate and sweet at the same time, you've found a wonderful balance here that can't help but draw the reader in. Nice, nice, nice!

  6. Wow thanks Elizabeth. Coming from you that really means something!!!!

  7. As soon as I saw the opening pic, I had to read this, I had to read. Great write, put mr right there (mentally)

    The pic - last fall, my partner were on a hill on a clear night. During my break, I fell asleep and dreamed someone I know came up the hill, lay down with our heads touching. We spoke without speaking. It was like she was in my head and I in hers. I've been back on that hill twice since, but no dream

    Again, excellent write!